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I put my ink to paper
I think of you
but ofcourse
that's all I can do
is think of you
you're always grabbing
my thoughts
you push me down
thoughts of you
is what's putting me
into the ground
you keep me
up all night
I am tired
thinking of you
my head
aches and breaks
I fall to the ground
thinking of you
©2007-2009 ~bothwellpwns
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:iconbreatheinwater:
nice and depressing, just the way I like it.
Seriously. Sad poetry is almost always better. Look at mine. :)
I like the little bit of rhyming you put in. just enough to make it rythmic, not enough to make it overly structured.

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Too many nights have I stayed up doing what this poem speaks of... great job.

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Wow. I haven't read a poem that has spoken to me that much in a long time. Great work! :D

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Thanks for the comment :)

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:) thanks

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